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My first skin ever! Made in 2/3 hours straight. Since it's my first, I'd like some serious feedback. For the record this is body1.md3

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Besides the back side of the hands being slightly... one... pieced or something, really nice. :D
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Noted. I missed this because I couldn't make out were it was on the wireframe. :D

I did change the colour so it matches to the original and added the rope around his waste, which wasn't funny at all, because of the mirroring :twisted: , and changed the proportions so the they match the wireframe. I'll get the hang of it.

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Post by da_weezle »

Looks much better with those colours (NOT COLORS :D).
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Oh, definitely agreed. I just figured that it might look a little different and more real in the darkness that Blood has very often, so I didn't think about that part. :)
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Alright then,
I just gave him fingers, dirty feet, again changed hand proportions and while I was at it, some knee-cavities(?).

I think I got every bodypart covered now, unless there some I don't know about yet. :P
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Post by Kazashi »

Ok, I've got good news, and bad news.

The good news is that the skin is looking nice. With more experience you'll be churning out some mighty fine skins. The bad news is that this is an old model, and has been replaced by something better. But, not one to let people get discouraged, contact myself or Cruaich (probably Cru as I'll be out of town for a day or two) and we can set you up with a fresh model that's begging to be skinned.
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Post by oBe »

*smacks head*

I did contact Cruiach and followed instructions...Is there like a list somewhere?

Anyone want a headless guy's skin?
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Post by scar3crow »

if you mean skin as in... not a texture

sure
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Kazashi, I knew we had a new innocent skin but I wasn't aware that it'd cover the decapitated courps as well. Though you may have mentioned something like that now that you bring it up... crap.
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Something that could look a bit better, put some wear on the shorts. It looks like they were bought yesterday at KMARCHÉ
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:lol: Funny how we're still commenting on this skin, didn't he say he was calling it done?
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Post by DustyStyx »

actualy I just wanted to type KMARCHÉ, but they really could use some wear. I need to find this model Kazashi is talking about. That and I didn't see this post untill it was to late.
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KMARCHÉ was worth it. :lol:
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Soooooo, just to make things clear .

For this I used an old model from beta3, whereas the beta4 I got later from Cruaich has a new one, and there you go. :wink: .

So this one won't be used.

And also this:
KMARCHÉ
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